I could never give you peace, so Ill give you pieces of me.
Take my stomach. I can’t taste what I eat.
I’ll give you my heart. It does nothing for me.
I’ll give you my voice. I have no energy to speak.
Grab my lungs. If there’s no smoke, I don’t breathe.
Take my arms and wrap them around you when you sleep.
Take my mind. I don’t care what you think.
Yes I know, it’s a lot to give for free.
I’ve used these things… all of them so wrongly.. and now their worth runs rather cheap… Yet, you’ve always found the value in me.
So here…. take my feet, my knees are just too weak.
But please promise
you’ll never use them to walk back to me.
Powerful and very well written ✨
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Thanks so much 💙
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Touching! Soul-deep. OM
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Thank you! 💙
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Didn’t expect that twist at the end!
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Neither did I 💙
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Wow really nice. I especially like the first and last lines.
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Thank you!
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Wow…deep
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I didn’t see it coming. But it’s a classic BURN!. Loved it.
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Lol thank you 💙
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Very good. Is the drawing yours?
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No, I just wrote this and went searching for a visual, and this artist amazed me 💙
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