In my dreams, I’d pack up my things, open the door and he’d get on his knees.
I’d try to push past him and he’d scream.
Telling me it’s not what it seems, and maybe promise me everything… Possibly beside a diamond ring.
Maybe he’d cut his seams and I’d see that he bleeds sincerity.
Or maybe he’d crumple into a million roses and fall at my feet like I’m his queen.
Id forgive him and love him like a king.
A royal love theme.
Golden crowned silver linings.
When asked why I have such depressing fantasies of breakups and makeups interweaved…
because when I walked away,
he watched me leave.
Deeply expressed and well written. Communication is Key in any relationship. She will always have fantasy going off if she walked and in her mind she expected him to react differently. Usually it’s a case where neither party really communicated, so there are unspoken expectations. They got caught up on the outside and there hearts never grew or caught up on the inside. 💯❤️🙏
Yonnie
InHisCare
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You been busy…your page looks different 🙏
Very Nice
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I have been battling writers block… believe it or not lol 💙
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Sometimes you need a break. Go for a walk, a drive to a different area then your usual. Breathe, meditate, enjoy scenery and take pictures. Most importantly, you may need to rest too! I keep you in prayer.
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Wonderfully expressed!
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Thanks so much 💙💙💙
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Sad, but well written and very good.
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Very sad. Poignant.
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Stunning poem. Some of the lines in this one are pure magic.
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Aw thanks so much 💙💙
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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This is a very moving poem!
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Thank you! 💙
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Yw welcome 😊
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Apologies…I did not mean to seem weird. Continue creating 🙏🙇♀️💜
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💜…thanks for responding back. Prior to You publishing, I was trying to sleep, talking to God, praying. Every time I tried to finish a piece I’ve been working on for my WordPress Blog Zero. You posted, my phone lit 🔥 up, I read it. It was so beautiful.
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Aw how sweet 💙
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Chills. A Beautiful and powerful expression.
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate that.
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Hey how is it going?
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Hey there 💙 Going well over here. How about you?
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Going well
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I really liked this poem!!! It had some similarities between the relationship of my mom and her ex.
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Thank you 💙
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You’re welcome! 😊
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I also might think about reblogging this poem.
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Reblogged this on Mirror Gate and commented:
I decided to reblog this poem because it reminds me of how many times my mom and her ex husband split up and got back together again.
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I shared the link to your outstanding poem on Go Dog Go Cafe – Pay it Forward Thursday.
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OMG! What a wonderful and vivid presentation – your words made it seem like a movie! So emotionally raw, moving and romantic! Sad but complex too. A great poem of yearning, wishing, longing and regret. Sometimes we don’t know what is best for us or the blessing the Universe has in store as we experience reality. I want to thank you for the seed of inspiration your piece has given me, more my experience as the versa to your vice!
A stunning piece that you should consider for your “Best of ” list!! Bellissimo, My Friend, Bellissimo
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Wow! Thank you so much 🙏🏼
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Beuaotuffuy expressed the yearning of the bleeding heart.
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Thhhhhaaaaiiink you 💙💙
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Don’t Miss reading – REALITY
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Always my pleasure sharing great writing with my followers!!!
xoxoxo
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